Edited script

I have edited the script so that people can see what changes I have made. This script goes along with the storyboard I have created.

1 EXT. STREET.
Teddy is found laid in a muddy puddle.
TEDDY

(vo)

There'll come a time when I'll look at the world and it will look back at me

Pedestrians/cars rush past the Teddy without noticing it.
TEDDY

(vo)

And I won't be there to see it

Teddy gets up and starts walking off.

2 INT. BEDROOM.
The Teddy finds the house of its owner. It enters the house, climbs upstairs and goes to the girl’s bedroom. There is a row of photos perfectly lined on the window sill. A desk with a pile of study books, homework and a laptop. There is a cork board on the wall with a perfectly cut out exam timetable to leave no excess.
TEDDY

(vo)

I've always been invisible. Had the ability.

My mummy had me for a limited time only

Teddy exits the room.

3 INT. LIVING ROOM.
Girl walks homework under her arm and delicately places it on the coffee table. The Teddy is sat on the sofa and she sits on him.
TEDDY

(vo)

And if I shouted she could sometimes hear me

Girl looks puzzled as she hears the Teddy. She pulls him out from under her and throws him to one side of the room. Teddy gets up and exits the room.

4 INT.KITCHEN.
Teddy is sat at the kitchen table. The stereo is playing. We can see the volume has been turned down to zero
TEDDY

(vo)

But of course she couldn't

Teddy goes to turn up radio and Celine Dion’s “All by myself” is playing. Teddy places head on table and starts to cry.

5 EXT. PARK.
The empty swing gently moves back and forth
TEDDY

(vo)

If you let me creep up on you
The bottle of vodka slowly empties
TEDDY

(vo)

I can make you disappear too
Teddy is staggering around the park, pissed out of his face.
TEDDY

(vo)

I could just tell you some things. Things you don't want to hear. Things no one should have to hear

The Teddy makes its way over to the car park.
TEDDY

(vo)

But it can't be your fault

The sound of a car engine is heard followed by a horn, the Teddy turns around and is struck by a car. It flies through the air and lands on the ground.
TEDDY

(vo)

I am invisible you see. And now I am gone

THE END